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April 7th Poetry Prompt: Utilize repetition in a poem

Deprivation
deprivation
                     Deprivation
                     deprivation

Sleeplessness

a constant within a weeks span--ensued by an eruption of

                                                                                            chaos
                                                                                                     chaos

uncertainty
uncertainty


everknowwhatitfeelsliketosit
aloneinyourcarattwoAMwhile
yourlovedoneiswrithinginpain
two-hundredyardsaway?

you are helpless--in agony and thinking
                                                                thinking
                                                                              thinking

aboutthatothertimeyouwere
atthisplaceandyourlovedone
waswrithinginpaininyour
faceandallyoucoulddowas
reassurehisfatewouldbe
substantialandhewouldgoon
unscathed.

But
      no
          no
              no
                  no
                      no
                          .....

that loved one is
                          gone and this one is
                                                          sick

you'll be alright
                         alright,
                                    right--
                                              right?

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